From dd652282c228192f84bd5cb966151ad64593149b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Daniel F. Dickinson" Date: Tue, 14 Jan 2020 16:21:28 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] README.md - Clarify confusing stage2 paragraph The sentence/word order was odd and awkward and therefore hard to parse. Fix that. Signed-off-by: Daniel F. Dickinson --- README.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 73d4961..d5819b8 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -264,11 +264,11 @@ maintenance and allows for more easy customization. creates necessary groups and gives the pi user access to sudo and the standard console hardware permission groups. - There are a few tools that may not make a whole lot of sense here for - development purposes on a minimal system such as basic Python and Lua + There are a few development tools here that may not make a whole lot + of sense on a minimal system. These tools include basic Python and Lua packages as well as the `build-essential` package. They are lumped right in with more essential packages presently, though they need not be with - pi-gen. These are understandable for Raspbian's target audience, but if + pi-gen. They are understandable for Raspbian's target audience, but if you were looking for something between truly minimal and Raspbian-Lite, here's where you start trimming. @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ maintenance and allows for more easy customization. - **Stage 5** - The Raspbian Full image. More development tools, an email client, learning tools like Scratch, specialized packages - like sonic-pi, office productivity, etc. + like sonic-pi, office productivity, etc. ### Stage specification From bca7b0e4049d984bbfd66dab099f1af77f3edbf3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Daniel F. Dickinson" Date: Tue, 14 Jan 2020 16:18:36 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] README.md - Fix grammar errors Fixes for a couple of mistaken wording: * Used isolate instead of isolation (verb vs. noun). * Used more easy instead of easier. Signed-off-by: Daniel F. Dickinson --- README.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index d5819b8..adce46f 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ It is recommended to examine build.sh for finer details. Docker can be used to perform the build inside a container. This partially isolates the build from the host system, and allows using the script on non-debian based -systems (e.g. Fedora Linux). The isolate is not complete due to the need to use +systems (e.g. Fedora Linux). The isolation is not complete due to the need to use some kernel level services for arm emulation (binfmt) and loop devices (losetup). To build: @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ solution). The build of Raspbian is divided up into several stages for logical clarity and modularity. This causes some initial complexity, but it simplifies -maintenance and allows for more easy customization. +maintenance and allows for easier customization. - **Stage 0** - bootstrap. The primary purpose of this stage is to create a usable filesystem. This is accomplished largely through the use of