From 46582b4a2e654e211070db0188a9c814ea97ac78 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "T. Joseph Carter" <iKarith@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 9 Sep 2016 23:15:41 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] README.md: Improve clarity of Raspbian stage 4

Changes suggested by Landrash, thanks!
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 README.md | 7 +++++--
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 9ff754f..2599f5a 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -71,5 +71,8 @@ maintenance and allows for more easy customization.
    enhancements, etc.  This is a base desktop system, with some development
    tools installed.
 
- - Stage 4, complete Raspbian system.  More development tools, large packages
-   like LibreOffice, email, sonic-pi, wolfram-engine, etc.  All the things.
+ - Stage 4, complete Raspbian system.  More development tools, an email
+   client, learning tools like Scratch, specialized packages like sonic-pi and
+   wolfram-engine, system documentation, office productivity, etc.  This is
+   the stage that installs all of the things that make Raspbian friendly to
+   new users.